"Your streak was just broken..." Gob pulled the hammer back and the familiar clicking of a loaded gun sounded. With an almost sadistic smile, he watched as Vanessa squirmed and wiggled, or tried to, out from under Gob's hold.
...
Ah, just click and read. I'm lazy today.
That night Gob turned Coalstone into an infant, he had decided to turn in early. Feeling quite tired after that day of doing nothing but pranking his stone cutting contestant. Gob snuggled into his levitating bed and almost fell right asleep until remembering a very important detail.
Mansion Challenge Submission: Both Teams Edition!
Nova mumbled to himself as he let the great doors of GOB Mansion swing open before him and his companions.
“I should NOT have let you have that much to drink, Spark…”
Last time, on the OC Apprentice. The two finalists: Coalstone and Reneigah discovered presents on their beds from Gob. Here, they open them.
Now, I present, part one of the OC Apprentice Finale!
Before we get started, I want to explain how blogs like these will play out. It'll be written somewhat like an episode, with both submissions from each team being posted here for you all to read and finally a bit written by me to tie the two pieces together. In this blog, it will describe each character meeting one another and arriving at GOB Estate with GOB himself explaining how things will work for the contest. I hope you enjoy it.
#Shrekt's submission:
GetRekt's Submission:
The last of the contestants had made it back to the mansion, they were unsurprisingly quiet on the ride back. The loss of the other two contestants had stung hard on all of them. Even Reneighah, who was usually talkative and positive, stayed in silence for the majority of the evening, too shocked to form words.
Coalstone looked about ready to erupt in anger taking a glance back at the bus, before kicking the doors to the mansion open.
"Pleasure doing business with you, Mr. McMahon, I'll see to it your company is in GOOD hands... Right, sorry, half the company is in GOOD hands." Gob smiled with triumph as he thought about his recent deal and success. It would be a very wonderful surprise to the finalists of the OCA. Gob leaned back in his leather chair and sighed a satisfied breath of air. Suddenly, he heard a knock at the door.
I'm too sick to write something creative so this will be short and sweet. Here are the pre-challenge submissions.
Alright, y'all I'll keep it short n' sweet. The next big challenge won't be until Thursday, so I want some pre-challenges finished. Now that each teammate is settled into the mansion, more or less, I want them to mingle. Here is a list of what I'd like to see.
1) Friendships growing stronger or newly budding
2) Communication between opponents on different teams
3) Drama of any sorts. (Violence/ arguments, etc.)
Here are the team's break challenge submissions. Enjoy.
#Shrekt's Submission:
It had been a while since Golden had gotten a good night’s rest. His worry over the meeting was overshadowed by the happiness he felt for his team’s victory. Despite his joy or rather because of it when they returned to the mansion he went straight to his room for rest. He assumed his teammates did the same.
Once again, this was a solo challenge, and each player submitted their work.
Coalstone's Submission
“Once again I find myself in a shitty situation on the cusp of this ridiculous game. And just after I was humiliated in front of my teammates, friends and everyone else.” Coalstone grumbled to himself as he tried to reign in his infamous temper, whilst seated at a bus station with a stack of 100 game consoles bearing GOBB’s name and insignia.
Veggie slumped down against a wall of boxes. She was lost. No, she was more than lost. This wasn't a basement, this was a storage unit if anything! This was more like a warehouse than a basement! It would take years for a group of the best explorers to make their way out of this horrid maze. Throughout her journey, Veggie found some interesting things. Antique weapons, old books from almost every era in history and artwork from some of the greatest artists Earth has seen. But all her
Here, the winners of the pre-challenge for the $50 dollar head-start will be announced.
XxX_Illuminati_XxX's Submission:
I, the almighty Thunderbolt Sentinel, was chosen to bat. Given my experience as a guard using polearms, athletic lifestyle, and most of all, my teammates loss of magic, I’m the team’s best bet.
That’s what I kept telling myself as I approached the diamond.
Team Illuminati's submission:
The team was sent to a small town in the human world nestled between a couple mountains. A beautiful rural town with friendly locals. GOB had told them that the reading would be at the town’s library.
The three entered the building to see the children waiting around a chair. They looked eager to hear the story they were promised.
“Alright, Sentinel you’re reading right?” Reneighah asked.
XxX_Illuminati_XxX's Submission:
It was Sentinel's turn to sing. He had thought of this for a long time. What to sing was easy.
Something casual? Nah, no one want’s casual. Something Classic? Good, shouldn’t rule it out. Something hip? No, by Celestia I hate hipsters. Something…..that says, powerful but something ponies like. I’ve got it!
XxX_Illuminati_XxX's Submission:
The roles were assigned. Sentinel was the guard due to his normal job and experience in the matter. Coalstone would ensure no one was caught with a counterfeit pass. That left Reneighah to pull the cart.
Recently and unfortunately, certain people, I won't say any names, got into a heated argument resulting in one dropping out due to hateful words being traded. The person who said those harsh words was dealt with and has been punished. Prior to this, another player has dropped out of the contest willingly. Gumball2 has left the game. The list below consists of the remaining competitors and their OCs.
Cambiato
(First Spark)
The Fan Without a Face
(Coalstone)
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